Friday, 8 April 2016

MY IPROUD 1

My Best learning .
This is my iPROUD. An iproud is something that you do when you are proud of a learning task.
Camp letter


WALT: create content with clear and interesting details


Success Criteria:


  • Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm with words or ideas)
  • Interesting beginning and ending
  • Using the senses (see, touch, taste, hear, smell)
  • Accurate Description of the object
  • Descriptive words


I am proud of this because I put a lot of work into it and used  lots of wow words and described my favourite parts.


My biggest challenge was writing it because of the spelling and finding good words.

8/3/16


Mrs Rebecca Hill
908a Albert St
Hastings


Dear Rebecca,


Thank you for spending your time off work at camp with us, and thank you for cooking dinner for us. I like how you supported us when we needed it.Thank you for driving us around like to Weka, Omatua and Onekawa Pools.


My favourite part was when we went on the river walk, because you go into deep hole and it was so warm and some of the sand felt like quicksand because my shoes were sticking down.


My second favourite thing was Onekawa pools because we spent over 2 hours there and I had so much fun. I did not go on the slides and I did some jumps off the deep side of the pools but not off the jumping boards.
My third favourite part was hide and go  seek I did not have the best hiding spaces  to hide in. but Bella let me hide with her.  Thank you for cleaning up the camp when us children were playing games with the parents and teachers.


Thank you for coming on camp. I hope you enjoyed camp, because I did.


Kind Regards,

Jordan Bainbridge.



2 comments:

  1. Great iPROUD Jordan I love how you described you're favirot part too!!!

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