Wednesday 31 May 2017

Letter to HBHS

Hi and welcome to my blog. Today I am showing you a letter to HBHS.

Here it is
Dear HBHS.

Thank you for coming to Parkvale School to perform to us. Both of your groups were AMAZING . In the Pasifika  group you had lots of personal best, respect,integrity, determination and enjoyment. Also in the Kapahaka they did their personal best, respect,integrity, determination and enjoyment. When they were performing they were all in time and it looks like you have been practicing a lot. I felt like I wanted to watch you perform all day. It was a great start to the day.

2 comments:

  1. Well done Jordan it's very despcrtrive. And it shows how much you enjoyed this peformance. This writing is very detailed to. It makes me confortbale and I think that HBHS would love this writing!! Kai pai jordan.!!

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  2. well done Jordan I love all the deaital in your work.
    P.S Anika

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